The Time I Gained Audience Feedback

As I have completed my magazine, I decided to print out my work and gain audience feedback in order to see what potential improvements can be made. I asked 2 females and 2 males due to the limited amount of available students in the sixth form area of the school. 

Overall, I think they liked my magazine a lot, mostly the males due to the masculine theme across the pages i.e. colour scheme. Most improvements lay with the females as they thought my background for my contents page and front cover was too 'dark'. In addition, the females felt there were more improvements to be made rather than the males, connoting that the magazine appealed better to the males. I will make minor improvements such as the size of the '+' on the front cover, slightly changing the opacity of the quote on the contents page, removing the 'U' on the contents page and changing the last paragraph of the article on the double page spread.