The Time I Finalized Things

I had shown my teacher my 'finalized' magazine and received a few points in order to achieve the highest grade. Firstly, I printed off my double page spread to see what it would look like and my teacher addressed a few things I had to change. 

On this page, I have to change:
- The positioning of the photography credit on the top left and replace it with 'Jay G's' social media
- Insert the flash, 'What you smiling at Jay?' in box
- Move the photography credit on the lower right side
- Insert 'In the spotlight' on the top strip

On this page, I have to change:
- Spacing in 'hip hop artist to'
- Change the intro underneath Jay G
- Make the drop capital be only for the letter 'T'
- Remove the top right quote and add promotion for Jay G's album instead

With my contents page, I have added an additional image, (taken from here: http://www.bbc.co.uk/staticarchive/3fea19d1eb035ae1f26dd37d7abfddca2d370b77.jpg) I have also added a 'win' section that allows readers to go straighT to the page of competitions. 

This is what my finalized and changed product looks like...